photo: Lauren Moscato
“Is this the right place?” She asked. “It looks abandoned.”
“That’s the point,” he said.
The pair had been on the run for days, passing through other ghost towns, looking for others. This had to be the destination. The longer they were out in the open, the more likely they would be attacked or captured.
She looked up at the weathered door on the top story. No stairs. Smart. Safe. They could hide here.
“How do we get up there?” She asked.
The door slowly opened. A man threw down a rope ladder.
“Climb up. We’ve been waiting for you.”
[100 words]
This was written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields – a weekly prompt and challenge to write a story in 100 words or less.
Problem solves! Nice one.
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Thank you!
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Problem solved.
Good story. I enjoyed this one.
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Glad you liked it!
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Hmm. Not sure I’d take him up on that offer. Interesting.
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I’m not sure that I would either…
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Very good but I would like to know what they are running from.
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Thanks. They are running from some kind of new world order type of situation.
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Creepy post-apocalyptic feeling yarn. Nicely done.
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That’s what I was going for. Thanks!
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Right on time!
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Definitely!
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I like the way you pull the reader in, and yet don’t spell it all out. This could be futuristic, present or past– the story is timeless. Nice job!
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Thanks! I really appreciate it 🙂
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Of course, it they’re discovered there’s no easy escape either. Safe for now, though!
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True. They could be sitting ducks up there. But safe for now.
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