“Come on, it’s just pizza.”
“I just want to talk.”
“I miss you so much.”
Ella knew that meeting him was not just about pizza. He would try to worm his way back into her life. John would beg for forgiveness. Again.
Yet here she was, standing outside of the cafe deciding whether or not to grant his request.
Maybe I should forgive him. I mean, we had some good times. Before.
Then images paraded through her mind like a bad slideshow. Broken promises. Lies. Disappointment. Fear.
Be smart. Don’t fall for it again.
She walked away.
Pizza for one.
PHOTO PROMPT © Dale Rogerson
Happy Friday! This is written for the weekly flash fiction challenge, Friday Fictioneers. Check out the other 100-word gems of flash fiction here. Many thanks to our lovely host, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields.
Nice take on the prompt. Loved the reference to a bad slide show.
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Dear Amie,
In the long run I think she’ll be the winner. good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I think she will, too. Thanks!
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I hope she’ll stay smart. The bad slideshow feels like her life passing before her eyes – best to steer clear of John. Well done.
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I think she will. Thanks!
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Woohoo! I’m glad she decided to walk away. I hope she continues to walk away from her past rather than towards it.
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I think she is done with the past. Thanks!
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Cute! ❤
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Thanks!
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Sensible girl.
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Wise decision
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I agree!
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The truth hurts
Both parties victims
Only of the truth.
To suffer it again
Oh no right choice
MADE
Great bit of fiction!
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Right choice, I agree! Thanks!
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☺
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PS Thanks for the follow!
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You’re welcome! Thanks to you for the follow ☺
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Keep you’re eyes open for some Clerihew poetry coming up 🙂
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Often old images do flood our mind like a slideshow. Well crafted.
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Thank you!
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Good story. I believe in forgiveness — we all make mistakes and sometimes repeatedly. So when do you finally say “This is it. Goodbye.” I hope if she walks away she isn’t plagued later by a bad case of “What ifs.”
One writing note: watch out for needless “qualifying words” like just. That’s one of my favorites, too, along with really & then.
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Hopefully she won’t have regrets. It can be hard to decide when enough is enough. Yes, qualifying words are things I need to work on (especially just). Thanks for feedback.
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Wooooo good for her. He sounds like a jerk. Glad she agreed to meet him out first up too… easier to escape
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That’s right. She’s smart and careful.
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I’m glad she was strong enough to walk away. For those who habitually lie and break promises it becomes a way of life, making permanent reform almost impossible. He would slip back into old ways fast, if she agreed to give their relationship another try.
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I agree. Sometimes the relationship can’t be repaired and moving on is the healthiest thing for everyone. Thanks for reading.
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I’m so glad she made that choice!
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Me, too!
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i’m glad she finally realized it was time to move on. nice story.
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Thanks!
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Well written Amie. Convincing the heart that the head is right can be the hardest thing in the world.
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Absolutely. I couldn’t have said it better. Thanks!
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Brilliant! This is such an empowering piece. I loved ‘bad slideshow’ and the final words of the story, also the title. Great story.
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Thank you!
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You get burned once, shame on them. Burned twice, shame on you.
Walking away is a good choice.
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I agree. Thanks!
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I can so relate to this, Amie. You’ve made Pizza for One sound delicious!
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I can relate also. Thanks!
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Good for her! All it takes is that first time to walk away. First and last time to allow herself to be snookered into a false love.
Pizza for one does indeed sound delicious.
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That first time walking away definitely makes one stronger. Thanks!
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Great story. I am glad she had the strength of mind to walk away. Gave the story a circular completeness.
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Thank you!
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Sounds like a smart decision. We all find it hard to change our behaviours, cheats and manipulators most of all. Great stuff Amie
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That is true. Change is difficult for all of us but for some more than others. Thanks!
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My pleasure 🙂
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