Roger couldn’t believe it was ending like this.
The night had been going perfectly. When the leggy redhead came on to him at the bar, he was dumbfounded by his good fortune. Drinks flowed and she draped on him like a cheap suit.
When she led him somewhere private, he went willingly.
So how did he end up flat on the ground looking up into the barrel of her pistol, her lace-up high-heel boot grinding into his chest?
He knew there was a price on his head. He just never thought his hit-man would be the woman of his dreams.
PHOTO PROMPT © Magaly Guerrero
Happy weekend! This is written for the weekly flash fiction challenge, Friday Fictioneers. Check out the other 100-word gems of flash fiction here. Many thanks to our lovely host, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields.
A wonderful story! Some people are not who we think they are!
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Very true! Thanks!
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Surprise, surprise.
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Indeed!
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Great piece! I could see everything so clearly. Yup she caught him alright!
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Yes, she did… easily!
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Great story, it reminded me of the tale of the Israelis sent to avenge the Munich Olympic games massacre. One of them was eventually caught in just this way.
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Ah, that is so interesting. Thanks for commenting.
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If you want to wipe out a bloke, send in a leggy redhead 🙂
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Works every time, right?
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Glad I found you throught Trent. Nice story, enjoyed it very much.
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you stopped by!
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Glad you write
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Thanks!
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Them’s the breaks, as they say. Nicely done.
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Thank you!
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There’s a man who was thinking with the wrong part of his body! Great story.
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Definitely! Thank you!
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Dear Amie,
She certainly was he woman of his dreams. Nightmares are dreams. 😉 Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you!
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poor guy. he didn’t see it coming and neither did i. 🙂
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Poor, naive fool. That’ll teach him for allowing himself to be led by parts of his body other than his brain! Nicely told Amie
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Serves him right. Thanks!
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Well, he must have had an assassin after him for a reason … 🙂
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Right!
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This was fabulous, Amie! So well done…
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Thank you!
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Great ending, loved it.
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Thanks!
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Very funny. And that’s the thing when there’s a price on your head, you can’t trust anyone.
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So true!
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I can’t help but LOL 😉
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This is such a fun and a brilliant take on the FF prompt! Loved it. Poor guy.
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Thank you!
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My pleasure!
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What a grand twist at the end!!! Kudos.
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Thank you!
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Great action, and I didn’t see it coming either. I love it.
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Thank you!
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