There was a reason the Hotel Souriant staff avoided room 215.
It was cold and uncomfortable but it also buzzed with negative energy. It seemed watchful, knowing. Like a fat, greedy spider waiting for prey to get caught in the web.
Five people had disappeared from that room in as many years.
The traveling businessman checked in on Monday. Almost imperceptible, a low groan rumbled through the bones of the old building. Darkness stirred.
By checkout Tuesday, he had vanished… though his belongings still littered the floor of room 215.
The staff swore they heard a satisfied sigh echoing through the hall.
Happy weekend! This is written for the weekly flash fiction challenge, Friday Fictioneers. Check out the other 100-word gems of flash fiction here. Many thanks to our lovely host, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields.
Very creepy. 😉
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Thanks 😊
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I will not be staying there!
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Me either!
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Very atmospheric piece. Nice take on the prompt.
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Thank you!
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Great atmosphere, a classic creepy mystery. Well done.
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Thank you!
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Oooooooooo i love a good mysterious house! Dont let me stay in that room!
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I wouldn’t go anywhere near that room!
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I am sure that I heard the hotel burp!
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That’s what I was going for! Glad you heard it!
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the traveling businessman should ask for a refund if he ever made it back. ::)
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He should. I don’t think they will see him again, though…
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I’m really wondering about that “satisfied sigh”.
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I wouldn’t even consider working there ! Whatever it is just might decide to do a little hall walking one day or night.
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I wouldn’t either.. for the same reason!
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A very creepy hotel and a story full of atmospherics.
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thank you!
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Good grief – a hotel room that eats people? Very creepy indeed! Nicely paced througout and well written Amie
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I’ve been reading lots of Stephen King lately 😉 Thanks!
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Ha! Nothing at all wrong with that! 🙂
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I’m thinking the staff must be under some spell to still be offering said room…otherwise, that sucker should be barred and banned!
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I agree. They could be under it’s control…
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Hope there was no indigestion involved – that could get ugly very quickly. :o) Loved it, Amie!
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Lol, yes it could! Thanks!
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Lovely bit of horror, Amie
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Thank you!
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Wow, an evil room and it’s not even on the 13th floor. Good writing, Amie. This would also make a great hook for a longer supernatural thriller. 😀 — Suzanne
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Thank you. I would love to expand this to a longer piece.
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Well, 215 seems hungry, doesn’t it?
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Well, not any more. Ha ha. Yes it is a hungry entity.
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It will be next year….
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